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Last Dance
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-I spent another weekend sitting at home,
-I'm surrounded by friends but still all alone.
-I can't bear to be without you here,
-I'm drowning my sorrows in cases of beer.
-Just pick up the phone,
-i know you're home.
-Please give me a second chance,
-And let me have this one last dance.
-I'm surrounded by friends but still all alone.
-I can't bear to be without you here,
-I'm drowning my sorrows in cases of beer.
-Just pick up the phone,
-i know you're home.
-Please give me a second chance,
-And let me have this one last dance.
i couldn't sleep, and it just hit me. I'm not usually a writer so this is one of my first works. written 7/23/06
© 2006 - 2024 wizardwarior3
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Quite interesting. 
I'm not much into rhyme, but this one isn't bad. ^^
I think you're muse is trying to tell you something, maybe you outta listen to her. ~.^
Cause, for a first poem, this one is NOT bad.
I'd like to see you try your hand at some more!
I'm not much into rhyme, but this one isn't bad. ^^
I think you're muse is trying to tell you something, maybe you outta listen to her. ~.^
Cause, for a first poem, this one is NOT bad.
I'd like to see you try your hand at some more!